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Ajmal Roshan's avatar

There’s something really sharp here about pain not always becoming wisdom. Sometimes people romanticize suffering like it automatically makes someone deeper, but this piece pushes back on that and says no, sometimes pain just makes the world heavier to move through. Well done :)

Narcissus's avatar

Sometimes all pain teaches is that exists.

I appreciate your comment Ajmal.

Hiritika's avatar

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Narcissus's avatar

I appreciate you. Thank you for always being here.

Azinya Glass's avatar

β€œLost inside a quiet torment that has no geography”

I love the vagueness of this piece. It’s abstract yet concrete. Relatable in every word and description. Truly wonderful work.

Narcissus's avatar

I appreciate it, glad something landed with you.